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May 20, 2025
Seen ~ Photo by Patrice

I haven’t seen
what
you have seen

I haven’t been
what
you have been

But

Here we are
both of us together
forever
it appears, it seems

What more do we want
what
more do we need? 
~ Patrice  

@ Patrice Clarkson – 2025

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6 comments

  1. Dawna's avatar

    beautifully written

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         by Dawna May 20, 2025 at 1:16 pm
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  2. joannerambling's avatar

    So very nice, thank you

    Liked by 1 person

         by joannerambling May 20, 2025 at 4:57 pm
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  3. mentalnotes1's avatar

    I love horses, I take care of horses on a horse sanctuary for retire horses a few days a week after work. It’s my place of peace.
    🐎 ❤️🐎❤️🐎❤️🐎❤️🐎❤️
    This poem was quietly powerful, acknowledging difference, yet finding unity. Simple and tender.

    I love how you used synonymy or tautology for your play on words.

    “It appears, it seems”
    Nicely written! 🐎❤️🐎

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         by mentalnotes1 May 27, 2025 at 6:59 pm
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  4. Patrice's avatar

    Thank you so much!😊
    I too LOVE horses. They are beautiful creatures that have such understanding and caring love. 💕

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         by Patrice May 27, 2025 at 7:10 pm
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